Wednesday, February 20, 2013

Rayne Hall - Writing Scary Scenes Promo


Hi all.  I would like to welcome to my blog today, Rayne Hall, author of Writing Scary Scenes.  Her book is full of excellent advice on how to inject tension, and horror into any sort of genre.  And today, she's going to explain how to create a Black Moment for you novel.
by Rayne Hall

If you're writing a novel, consider a Black Moment about two thirds into the book.

At this stage, everything and everyone has turned against the hero (who can, of course, be a heroine). 

The hero is under pressure and close to giving up. Internal and external conflicts have increased to the degree that your hero can't bear it any more. His girlfriend has broken up with him, his allies have deserted the cause, he has been fired from his job and evicted from his home, the villain's henchmen are closing in, and his big secret has been exposed in the press. Under pressure, he is close to giving up. To make matters worse, his girl has been abducted and will die unless the hero surrenders the proof of the villain's machinations... and he can neither rescue her nor deliver the documents because he's locked up in a prison cell.  All seems lost.

If you can think of another way to make it still more difficult for your hero, pile it on.

Make it still more difficult by taking away his means of communication - the mobile phone (British) or cellphone (American), the internet connection, the humans who might carry a message.

Only a tiny shred of hope remains that the hero will achieve his big, important goal.

The hero feels rage, despair and a whole cocktail of other emotions. Consider adding fear: he fears not only for himself, but for the safety of his abducted girlfriend, as well as for the people in the building the villain is about to bomb,  for the survival of the human race, or whatever is at stake in your story.

Turn the suspense volume up as high as you can.  The “ticking clock” technique works well. The hero has only a certain amount of time - perhaps one hour - to escape from the villain's clutches and rescue his girlfriend, defuse the bomb or save the world. He is aware of the time ticking away. You can emphasise this by actually showing a clock. The hero sees he has thirty minutes left... then fifteen... This builds enormous suspense.

Let the reader feel the hero's physical responses to the tension: the aching neck, the dry throat, the sweat trickling down his sides.

The blacker you make the Black Moment, the more exciting the Climax and the more rewarding the End.


If you're a writer and have questions, please leave a comment. I'll be around for a week, and I'll reply. I love answering questions.

Thank you so much Rayne.  

Rayne Hall has published more than forty books under different pen names with different publishers in different genres, mostly fantasy, horror and non-fiction. Recent books include Storm Dancer (dark epic fantasy novel), Six Historical Tales Vol 1, Six Scary Tales Vol 1, 2 and 3 (mild horror stories), Six Historical Tales (short stories), Six Quirky Tales (humorous fantasy stories), Writing Fight Scenes and Writing Scary Scenes (instructions for authors).

She holds a college degree in publishing management and a masters degree in creative writing. Currently, she edits the Ten Tales series of multi-author short story anthologies: Bites: Ten Tales of Vampires, Haunted: Ten Tales of Ghosts, Scared: Ten Tales of Horror, Cutlass: Ten Tales of Pirates, Beltane: Ten Tales of Witchcraft, Spells: Ten Tales of Magic, Undead: Ten Tales of Zombies and more.  

Rayne's Website:
and you can contact her on Twitter: @raynehall

Writing Scary Scenes is available at the following links:

Check out the table of contents from Writing Scary Scenes for a taste of what you'll be getting:


1. Flavours of Fear
2. Instant Hooks
3. What Lurks Behind That Door?
4. Dark and Dangerous
5. Sounds Build Suspense
6. Total Isolation
7. Strip to Tease
8. Keep the Clock Ticking
9. Feel the Fear
10. Pacing
11. Euphonics
12. Peaks and Troughs
13. Structuring a Scary Scene
14. Choosing the Location
15. Using the Senses
16. Cliffhangers
17. Villains and Monsters
18. Captivity
19. Chases and Escapes
20. Violence And Gore
21. Humour
22. Backloading
23. The Story's First and Final Scenes
24. Black Moment And Climax Scenes
25. Genres
26. The Wimp Effect
Sample Story: Druid Stones
Sample Story: Through The Tunnel
Sample Story: Only A Fool

Cheers everyone, and remember, if you have any questions for Rayne, feel free to ask.  


  1. This looks very good. I'm always looking for a new book on the craft.

    Anna @

  2. Excellent information. Sounds like a great craft book. :-)

    How are you Steph? Writing anything new?

  3. Hi Anna,
    Does your current work in progress contain a scary scene?

  4. Sounds like a book full of emotional flavor! It's going on my TBR list.

  5. Good stuff!
    I also threw the kitchen sink at my character. That's always scary.

  6. Sounds excellent! Adding it to the list!